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Describe the changes of a city

Describe the changes of a city pKDML

The maps illustrates the development of a coastal city over a 36-year period. Overall, It is clear that the town has experience dramatic changes. In 1995, the town was much greener with a large number of trees in residential area. Lately all trees were cut down to clear a way for tennis court. Comparing to present days there were less dwellings in the past, with an expanded street to enlarge an residential area. Moreover, a golf area sprang up in the north lands where a farm used to be. Further recreations took place in south-west part of the city. The shop building now has become a restaurant, whereas near the hotel, which is in the opposite side of a road, has erected a car parking zone. It is clear that fishing port was set up close to fish market that was constructed in apartment zone. To conclude, it is clear that data indicates that the town has shifted from largely rural to mainly urban landscape.

The maps You should probably use "illustrate".illustrate
illustrates
 the development of a coastal city over a 36-year period. Overall
, It is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsunnyfair
clear
 that the town has experience dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. In 1995, the town was much greener with Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number of
 trees in residential area. Lately all trees were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsunnyfair
clear
 a way for tennis court. Comparing to present days there were Did you mean "fewer"? The noun dwellings is countable.fewer
less
 dwellings in the past, with an expanded street to enlarge Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 residential area. Moreover
, a golf area sprang up in the north lands where a farm This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be. Further
 recreations took place in south-west part of the city. The shop building This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 has become a restaurant, whereas near the hotel, which is in the opposite side of a road, has erected a car parking zone. It is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsunnyfair
clear
 that fishing port was set
 up close to fish market that was constructed
 in apartment zone. To conclude
, it is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsunnyfair
clear
 that data indicates that the town has shifted from largely
 rural to mainly
 urban landscape. 