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Photosynthesis in the plants

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The diagram represents the pictorial presentation of photosynthesis. In this process of photosynthesis, plants prepare their food with the help of various. During the day time, plant takes sunlight in the form of light energy. Then it goes to leaves where the green colour pigment chlorophyll is present. From the roots branches, water is taken up. And carbon dioxide is also neecessary for the formation of food which was released by human beings. Process of food making starts, where they produce glucose (food). Since the process has been starting and the remaining product which is releasing that's oxygen. It is an essential element for the survival of humans.
The diagram represents the pictorial presentation of photosynthesis. In this process of photosynthesis, plants prepare their
food
with the
help
of various. During the day time, plant takes sunlight in the form of light energy. Then it goes to
leaves
where the green
colour
pigment chlorophyll is present. From the roots branches, water
is taken
up. And carbon dioxide is
also
neecessary
for the formation of
food
which
was released
by human beings. Process of
food
making
starts
, where they produce glucose
(food)
. Since the process has been starting and the remaining product which is releasing that's oxygen. It is an essential element for the survival of humans.
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IELTS academic Photosynthesis in the plants

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