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Computer will become more intelligent than man

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It is if you table to see that a large number of young workers are in adequately equipped with soft skills than their counterparts in the past. Point to lack of proper piece of training at universities and workplaces, this is happening rapidly. There are many social culture changes and commercial demands which exhort youngsters to work like boats, thus, they do not exhibit appropriate etiquette and technology respect towards their colleagues. The absence of a code of conduct may ruin The healthy and welcoming surroundings of the company which has become a herculean task to mend. Technology First and foremost, technology
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equipped with soft
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skills
than their counterparts in the past. Point to lack of proper piece of training at universities and workplaces, this is happening
rapidly
. There are
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social culture
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and commercial demands which exhort youngsters to work like boats,
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, they do not exhibit appropriate etiquette and technology respect towards their colleagues. The absence of a code of conduct may ruin The healthy and welcoming surroundings of the
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company
which has become a
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task to mend. Technology

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IELTS academic Computer will become more intelligent than man

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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