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The graph illustrates the amount of overseas visitors to three areas (coast, mountains, and lakes) in a European country in the period from 1987 to 2007.

The graph illustrates the amount of overseas visitors to three areas (coast, mountains, and lakes) in a European country in the period from 1987 to 2007. 8x9bG
The graph illustrates the amount of overseas visitors to three areas (coast, mountains, and lakes) in a European country in the period from 1987 to 2007. Overall, the amount of people who come to European country had tended to increase in all the given period. Additionally, the coast areas become the love destination of overseas visitors. The amount of people who came to the mountain areas slightly increased all the time, from 20 thousand people to 35 thousand people in 2007. There was a highest amount of people who came to the coast in 1987, with 40 thousand people. But then, in 1992, the amount of people slightly decrease. In 2007, it became the most famous destination of overseas visitors, with nearly 75 thousand visitors. Although in 1987, a number of visitors went to lakes fewer than other places. But after that, there was an significant increased amount of visitors, peak at around 75 thousand people. In 2007, the number of visitors who came to this place had deceased 25 thousand, just have rest 50 thousand visitors.
The graph illustrates the
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to three areas (coast, mountains, and lakes) in a European country in the period from 1987 to 2007.
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to European country had tended to increase in all the
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, the coast areas become the
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destination of overseas
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. The
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of
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people
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came to the mountain areas
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increased all the time, from 20 thousand
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to 35 thousand
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people
in 2007. There was
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highest
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came to the coast in 1987, with 40 thousand
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.
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then, in 1992, the
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slightly
decrease. In 2007, it became the most
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destination of overseas
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, with
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75 thousand
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. Although in 1987, a number of
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went to lakes fewer than other places.
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after that, there was
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, peak at around 75 thousand
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. In 2007, the number of
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came to this place had deceased 25 thousand,
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have rest 50 thousand
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the amount of overseas visitors to three areas (coast, mountains, and lakes) in a European country in the period from 1987 to 2007.

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