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The bar chart gives information about how many people aged 25-34 own to the house or rent them. Moreover, it illustrates the charging of this chart from 2004 to 2011. The number of the home owner nearly unchanged in 5 years from 2004 to 2008, Although there was a little bit decreased in 2005 and 2006. But they had gone down rapidly since 2008. And in 2014 it dropped out to below 40%, weareas this reacted 55% in 2008. Just only in 2011 and 2012, the scale remained steady. On the others side, the renter percentage of the renders significantly increased over 11 years, it started in 2004 and ended in 2014. The number of renter has gone up nearly 30%. But it just rose a few percent each year. And in 2014 the scale reached the highest which was under 50% Overall, this can be seen from the chart which illustrates the percentage of the owner and the renter between the aged 24-35. The renters scale tends to increase each year and it is contrary to another one.
The bar chart gives information about how
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people
aged 25-34
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own
to the
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house
or rent them.
Moreover
, it illustrates the charging of this chart from 2004 to 2011.

The number of the
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home owner
nearly
unchanged in 5 years from 2004 to 2008, Although there was a
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decreased in 2005 and 2006.
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they had gone down
rapidly
since 2008. And in 2014 it dropped out to below 40%,
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this reacted 55% in 2008.
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in 2011 and 2012, the scale remained steady.

On the others side, the
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renter
percentage of the renders
significantly
increased over 11 years, it
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started
in 2004 and ended in 2014. The number of
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renter
has gone up
nearly
30%.
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But
it
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rose a few percent each
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year
. And in 2014 the scale reached the highest which was under 50%

Overall
, this can be
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seen
from the chart which illustrates the percentage of the owner and the
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renter
between the aged 24-35. The
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renters
scale tends to increase each
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year
and it is contrary to another one.
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