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The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010.

The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010. QwWry
At a fleeting glance, the linear chart illustrates compares the land which was utilized for organic crops in Country A and Country B from 1985 to 2010. The data has been calibrated in thousand hectares. As an overall assessment, it is immensely clear that the massive discrepancies can be witnessed in depicted chart. In 2000, the maximum hectares of land is used by County A for crops as compared to other years.
At a fleeting glance, the linear chart illustrates compares the land which
was utilized
for organic crops in Country A and Country B from 1985 to 2010. The data has
been calibrated
in
Use "a thousand" or use a number before 'thousand'.
thousand
hectares.

As an
overall
assessment, it is
immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the massive discrepancies can
be witnessed
in depicted chart. In 2000, the maximum hectares of land is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by County A for crops as compared to other years.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010.

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