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Global monthly users of Facebook and Instagram

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The bar graph shows data on information on the Global Month Users of Facebook and Instagram in 2018 documented on a 12 months period. Overall, it is clear that the month November was the most successful one during the entire period of time, where both Facebook and Instagram reached the highest level of users.  The entire period of time presents shifts in the number of users for the social media companies in each month continuously. In the month of November both social media giants reached their peak in 2018 with each of 140 million users documented. Furthermore, from July to October the user numbers of Instagram decreased gradually. In addition when the Instagram user numbers were still 110 in July they have fell down very fast and have reached the bottom of 5 million users.
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November was the most successful one during the entire period of time, where both Facebook and Instagram reached the highest level of
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of November both social media giants reached their peak in 2018 with each of 140 million
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IELTS academic Global monthly users of Facebook and Instagram

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