Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Hydroelectricity generation. Report main features and make comparisons where relevant

Hydroelectricity generation. Report main features and make comparisons where relevant qknKa
The diagram illustrates the process of generation of hydroelectric power enabled by power stations and the usage of powerful infrastructure, dams and power stations acting as reservoir and the powerhouse. An overview of the process notes that the generation of electricity is an activity majorly undertaking during the day and at nights the same setup operates to pump water-level back into the initial reservoir to favour the next day’s cycle. Dams acting as the initial reservoir for generating electricity, pump the river water stored through underground pipes to a power station when the gates are released. The power station is the heart of the process, where high speed turbines are installed connected to a generator. The flow of water during day after whirling with the turbines are extracted to a low-level reservoir which is re-used in the next day’s process. The turbine and generator work towards producing electricity and this is dissipated to powers lines and finally the national grid. At the night-time, the efficiency of this setup is increased, the water from the low-level-reservoir is pumped back through the same turbines which are reversible, and the water climbs up the same pipes to the high-altitude reservoir. Finally, the dam gates are closed with the stored river water to be used for the next cycle of electricity generation.
The diagram illustrates the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
of generation of hydroelectric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
enabled by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stations
and the usage of powerful infrastructure, dams and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stations
acting as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reservoir
and the powerhouse.

An overview of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
notes that the generation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electricity
is an activity
majorly
undertaking during the day and at nights the same setup operates to pump water-level back into the initial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reservoir
to
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
the
next
day’s cycle.

Dams acting as the initial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reservoir
for generating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electricity
, pump the river
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
stored through underground pipes to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
station
when the gates
are released
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
station
is the heart of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
, where high speed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbines
are installed
connected to a generator. The flow of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
during day after whirling with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbines
are extracted
to a low-level
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reservoir
which is re-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in the
next
day’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbine
and generator work towards producing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electricity
and this
is dissipated
to
The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "power".
powers
lines and
finally
the national grid.

At the night-time, the efficiency of this setup
is increased
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
from the low-level-reservoir
is pumped
back through the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbines
which are reversible, and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
climbs up the same pipes to the high-altitude
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reservoir
.
Finally
, the dam gates
are closed
with the stored river
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the
next
cycle of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electricity
generation.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Hydroelectricity generation. Report main features and make comparisons where relevant

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    Describe the given chart by selecting relevant information
    The bar chart gives information about how many people aged 25-34 own to the house or rent them. Moreover, it illustrates the charging of this chart from 2004 to 2011. The number of the home owner nearly unchanged in 5 years from 2004 to 2008, Although there was a little bit decreased in 2005 and 20...
  • 6band
    Visit abroad by UK residents by various purposes of visit between 1994 to 1998
    The provided the chart show the information about visits abroad by UK residents by various purposes of visit between 1994 to 1998. Overall, There was upward trend in people visit in western europe between 1994 to 1998. The highest crowd travelled in West europe. In detail, more than 22 thousand pe...
  • 5band
    Global monthly users of Facebook and Instagram
    The bar graph shows data on information on the Global Month Users of Facebook and Instagram in 2018 documented on a 12 months period. Overall, it is clear that the month November was the most successful one during the entire period of time, where both Facebook and Instagram reached the highest leve...
  • 5band
    The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010.
    At a fleeting glance, the linear chart illustrates compares the land which was utilized for organic crops in Country A and Country B from 1985 to 2010. The data has been calibrated in thousand hectares. As an overall assessment, it is immensely clear that the massive discrepancies can be witnessed ...
  • 5.5band
    The graph shows below the number of daily clients in three cafes in Namangan from 2005 to2020.
    The chart illustrates information about how many customers visited in three Cafe in Namangan over a fifteen-year period between 2005 and 2020. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that, having fluctuations all cafes over given period Boss Milk experienced an upward trend while Tamanno and Zeyt...
  • 6band
    THE ENVIROMENT AND OUR FUTURE
    Nowadays, we can’t begin a day without hearing news about the environment or the serious of pollution. Avoiding the rapid increase in the amount of pollution is so difficult that the government and the environmentalists have made all effort to reduce it for ages. However, we can’t live without water...





Get more results for topic:
  • Hydroelectricity generation. Report main features and make comparisons where relevant