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The graph illustrates the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by four vehicles, namely, Diesel cars, Petrol cars, lorries, and buses.

The graph illustrates the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by four vehicles, namely, Diesel cars, Petrol cars, lorries, and buses. b2lbq
The graph illustrates the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by four vehicles, namely, Diesel cars, Petrol cars, lorries, and buses. Overall, a significantly downward trend applied to the amount of nitrogen oxide produced by lorries, while the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by buses witnessed a slight increase. Additionally, the amount of nitrogen oxide produced by Petrol cars was subject to a marginal fluctuation, whereas the nitrogen oxide emitted by Diesel cars saw a slight decrease in this period. As can be seen from the graph, at the speed of 10 kph, buses emitted the highest amount of nitrogen oxide, at 40 g/km, which was nearly fourfold the nitrogen oxide emitted by Petrol cars, at 11 g/km. Meanwhile, the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by lorries was the second highest, at 33 g/km. In addition, the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by Diesel cars was the lowest, at 7 g/km. From 10 kph to 90 kph, the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by buses suddenly dropped before rising again to nearly 35 g/km at the speed of 90 kph. Besides, the nitrogen oxide emitted by lorries dramatically decreased to about 16 g/km. In addition, the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by Petrol cars and Diesel cars saw a fluctuation but slightly decreased to about 10 g/km and 5 g/km, respectively. Between 90 kph and 130 kph, the nitrogen oxide emitted by buses and lorries continued to rocketed and reached a peak of 42 g/km and 24 g/km. Similarly, the amount of nitrogen oxide which was emitted by Petrol cars saw a marginal rise to about 11 g/km. Meanwhile, the amount of nitrogen oxide produced by Diesel cars remained stable at 5 g/km from 90 kph to 130 kph.
The graph illustrates the
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amount
of nitrogen oxide which was
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emitted
by four vehicles,
namely
,
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Diesel
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cars
,
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Petrol
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cars
,
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lorries
, and buses.

Overall
, a
significantly
downward trend applied to the
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amount
of nitrogen oxide produced by
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lorries
, while the
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amount
of nitrogen oxide which was
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emitted
by buses witnessed a slight increase.
Additionally
, the
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amount
of nitrogen oxide produced by
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Petrol
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cars
was subject to a marginal fluctuation, whereas the nitrogen oxide
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emitted
by
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Diesel
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cars
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saw
a slight decrease in this period.

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from the graph, at the speed of 10 kph, buses
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the highest
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of nitrogen oxide, at 40 g/km, which was
nearly
fourfold the nitrogen oxide
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emitted
by
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Petrol
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cars
, at 11 g/km. Meanwhile, the
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of nitrogen oxide which was
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by
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was the second highest, at 33 g/km.
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, the
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of nitrogen oxide which was
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emitted
by
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Diesel
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was the lowest, at 7 g/km.

From 10 kph to 90 kph, the
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of nitrogen oxide which was
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emitted
by buses
suddenly
dropped
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before
rising again to
nearly
35 g/km at the speed of 90 kph.
Besides
, the nitrogen oxide
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by
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lorries
dramatically
decreased to about 16 g/km.
In addition
, the
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amount
of nitrogen oxide which was
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by
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Petrol
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and
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Diesel
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cars
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a fluctuation
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decreased to about 10 g/km and 5 g/km,
respectively
.

Between 90 kph and 130 kph, the nitrogen oxide
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by buses and
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continued to rocketed and reached a peak of 42 g/km and 24 g/km.
Similarly
, the
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of nitrogen oxide which was
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by
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Petrol
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cars
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saw
a marginal rise to about 11 g/km. Meanwhile, the
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of nitrogen oxide produced by
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Diesel
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cars
remained stable at 5 g/km from 90 kph to 130 kph.

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