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how ceramic pots are manufactured.

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The diagram illustrates how ceramic pots are manufactured. Overall, there are eleven stages in the process of producing ceramic pots, beginning with the collection of raw materials and ending with the production of finished pots. In the first steps, the raw materials are dug out of the ground by a digger and then transported to a factory by a truck. Next, the materials are crushed by a machine into powder which is then mixed with water. After that they are poured into a mould and dry for 4- 6 hours. to create assembled clay pots. Following this, the clay pots are put in an oven where they are heated at a temperature of 1000˚C. finally, the pots are coloured and put into a color firing oven before becoming finished pots.
The diagram illustrates how ceramic
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pots
are manufactured
.

Overall
, there are eleven stages in the process of producing ceramic
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pots
, beginning with the collection of raw materials and ending with the production of finished pots.

In the
first
steps, the raw materials
are dug
out of the ground by a digger and then transported to a factory by a truck.
Next
, the materials
are crushed
by a machine into powder which is then mixed with water. After that they
are poured
into a
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mould
and dry for
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4- 6
hours.
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to
create assembled clay pots.

Following this, the clay
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pots
are put
in an oven where they
are heated
at a temperature of 1000˚C.
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finally
, the
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pots
are
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coloured
and put into a color firing oven
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before
becoming finished
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pots
.
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IELTS academic how ceramic pots are manufactured.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
130 words
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