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The diagram shows the carbon cycle.

The diagram shows the carbon cycle. j8gbN
The diagram illustrates the cycle of carbon dioxide in an atmosphere in its various forms. Overall, Carbon dioxide is generated by respiration of animals, combustion of fuel by cars and photosynthesis by pant and end up in form of limestone and shells. Initially, the Process begins with Plants that release CP2 in air in a process of photosynthesis and later get consumed by animals that generate CP2 as a respiration process. Later the decomposition of Plants and animal will end in form of fossils by a process of fossilization. After several decades these fossils are extracted as fuels in state of oil, coal and gas later the combustion of this fuel will lead to pollution that is the major form of CP2. At last these carbon generated in all the given process is end up in oceans later it is converted as limestone and shells (CaCo3) by the process of sedimentation.
The diagram illustrates the cycle of carbon dioxide in an atmosphere in its various forms.

Overall
, Carbon dioxide
is generated
by respiration of animals, combustion of fuel by cars and photosynthesis by pant and
end
up in form of limestone and shells.

Initially
, the
Process
begins
with Plants that release CP2 in air in a
process
of photosynthesis and
later
get
consumed by animals that generate CP2 as a respiration
process
.
Later
the decomposition of Plants and animal will
end
in form of fossils by a
process
of fossilization.

After several decades these fossils
are extracted
as fuels in state of oil, coal and gas
later
the combustion of this fuel will lead to pollution
that is
the major form of CP2. At last these carbon generated in all the
given
process
is
end
up in oceans
later
it
is converted
as limestone and shells (CaCo3) by the
process
of sedimentation.
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