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The pie chart below illustrate percentage of energy capacity in 2020 and anticipate how it is in 2030.

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The pie chart below illustrate percentage of energy capacity in 2020 and anticipate how it is in 2030. Overall, we can see that fossil energy accounts for the highest percentage of all other types of energy in both years. Percent of fossil fuels in 2012 is 64% and accounts for the highest percentage and its share will decrease by 20% in the following 18 years. The second largest percentage belongs to other types of renewable energy. It is predicted to decrease by 3% by 2030. Renewable energy types such as wind and solar will increase by quite a few percent after 18 years is 7. % and 16%. Flexible energy capacity or nuclear power will not change too much in the future.
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in both years. Percent of fossil fuels in 2012 is 64% and accounts for the highest
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and its share will decrease by 20% in the following 18 years. The second largest
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belongs to other types of renewable
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types such as wind and solar will increase by quite a few percent after 18 years is 7. % and 16%. Flexible
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capacity or nuclear power will not
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too much in the future.
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