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The graph illustrates data about the top eight well-known places for new married couples in the UK in 2010.

The graph illustrates data about the top eight well-known places for new married couples in the UK in 2010. j8dd8
The graph illustrates data about the top eight well-known places for new married couples in the UK in 2010. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that Thailand, Bali, Costa Rica and the Maldives headed the list, while Spain, Paris, The Lake District and The Greek Islands were less popular. Looking at the details, in the first place was Thailand with 1, 410 visitors. Next came were Bali and Costa Rica with 1, 335 and 750 couples visited these places respectively. The Maldives was not quite as popular, just 600 couples came here for their honeymoon. On the other hand, The Greek Islands was ranked fifth on the list with 432 couples. This was followed by Paris which did not reach as high place as The Greek Islands with 209 husband and wife was reported. With respect to Spain, there were 140 newlyweds choose this place for honey moon. The last place on the list was The Lake Distric with only 124 couples visited here in 2010.
The graph illustrates data about the top eight well-known
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for new married
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in the UK in 2010.

Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Thailand, Bali, Costa Rica and the Maldives headed the list, while Spain, Paris, The Lake District and The Greek Islands were less popular.

Looking at the
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, in the
first
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was Thailand with 1, 410 visitors.
Next
came were Bali and Costa Rica with 1, 335 and 750
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visited these
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respectively
. The Maldives was not quite as popular,
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600
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came here for their honeymoon.

On the other hand
, The Greek Islands
was ranked
fifth on the list with 432
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couples
. This
was followed
by Paris which did not reach as high
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as The Greek Islands with 209 husband and
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was reported
. With respect to Spain, there were 140 newlyweds choose this
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for
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honey moon
. The last
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on the list was The Lake
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Distric
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124
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visited here in 2010.
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