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The given table compares the proportion of adults in urban and rural who participated in various free time activities between 1990 and 2010.

The given table compares the proportion of adults in urban and rural who participated in various free time activities between 1990 and 2010. eERKJ
The given table compares the proportion of adults in urban and rural who participated in various free time activities between 1990 and 2010. Reading had the largest percentage of people who took part in activities in both years and also in urban and rural. In 1990 in urban and rural had the total figure for Playing was 47% with 21% in urban and 26% in rural. There was an activity that had a roughly total figure three times as high as the total figure for Playing, that was Reading with 132%. This was the highest proportion with 31% and 71%, respectively. In 2010 in the same location. There was a special thing was Reading percent was the same 78% and had the highest figure in both locations. In terms of Playing and Photography had the total almost a third in urban with 14% and 17%, respectively. The total figure for the same activities in urban as high as in rural was 50%. As for Animated had the proportion of 10% in urban and 14% in rural and this percent had the lowest in 2010
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and
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rural
who participated in various free time
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activities
between 1990 and 2010.

Reading had the largest percentage of
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who
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took part
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activities
in both years and
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and rural.

In 1990 in
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and
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rural
had the
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total
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for Playing was 47% with 21% in
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urban
and 26% in
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rural
. There was an
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activity
that had a roughly
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total
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figure
three times as high as the
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total
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figure
for Playing, that was Reading with 132%. This was the highest proportion with 31% and 71%,
respectively
.

In 2010 in the same location. There was a special thing was Reading percent was the same 78% and had the highest
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figure
in both locations. In terms of Playing and Photography had the
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total
almost a third in
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urban
with 14% and 17%,
respectively
. The
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total
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figure
for the same
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activities
in
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urban
as high as in
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rural
was 50%. As for Animated had the proportion of 10% in
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urban
and 14% in
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rural
and this percent had the lowest in 2010
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IELTS academic The given table compares the proportion of adults in urban and rural who participated in various free time activities between 1990 and 2010.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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