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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two provided maps illustrate the outline changes of the road entering a city hospital from the year 2007 to 2010. Overall, it is apparent that Hospital Road and the car park were modified to make way for a bus stop connection to the hospital and open up more parking lots. In 2007, City Hospital was surrounded by Ring road, where it connected Hospital Road to the south. To the south of City Hospital, passing through Hospital Road located City Road. One the right-hand side of Hospital Road lied a staff and communal car park, which could be accessed via Ring Road. However, in 2010, the road plan underwent a few renovations. Firstly, two roundabouts were introduced at both ends of Hospital Road, with two connections to a newly-built bus station. The connection between a roundabout and a bus stop greatly made a transformation to the hospital, where people can easily access City Hospital right from the bus station. Secondly, the new car park was opened up for public use in the east of the hospital because the previous parking space was converted to be the sole parking space for the staff.
The two provided maps illustrate the outline
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changes
of the
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road
entering a city
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hospital
from the year 2007 to 2010.
Overall
, it is apparent that
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Hospital
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Road
and the car park
were modified
to
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make
way for a bus
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stop
connection to the
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hospital
and open up more parking lots.

In 2007, City
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Hospital
was surrounded
by Ring
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road
, where it connected
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Hospital
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Road
to the south. To the south of City
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Hospital
, passing through
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Hospital
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Road
located City
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Road
. One the right-hand side of
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Hospital
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Road
lied a staff and communal car park, which could
be accessed
via Ring Road.

However
, in 2010, the
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road
plan underwent a few renovations.
Firstly
, two roundabouts
were introduced
at both ends of
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Hospital
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Road
, with two connections to a
newly
-built bus station. The
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connection between
a roundabout and a bus
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stop
greatly
made a transformation to the
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hospital
, where
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people
can
easily
access City
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Hospital
right from the bus station.
Secondly
, the new car park
was opened
up for public
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use
in the east of the
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hospital
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because
the previous parking space
was converted
to be the sole parking space for the staff.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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