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Money spent in books line graph

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The line graph gives information about spending money on books in four different countries Germany, Farnce, Italy, and Austria between 1995 amd 2005. It is clear that the money was spend on books considerably increased over a period of 10 years while the highest amount of money spent on books in Germany. In 1995, around 90 million US dollars spend on books in Germany. Moreover, France and Italy were used money approximately 53 million US dollars and 50 million US dollars. There was a least amount spend on books about 30 million US dollars in Austria. The spending of money on books was risen with the passage of time. However, Germany slightly rose around 95 milliom US dollars whereas, Austria and France increased nearly 71 and 72 million US dollars in 2005 respectively. 62 million US dollars spend on books in Italy, 2005.
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, Italy, and Austria between 1995
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in Germany. In 1995, around 90
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in Austria. The spending of
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IELTS academic Money spent in books line graph

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