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the graph gives us a snapshot of rates hired teacher from first year after their graduation, according to the results the diagram shows us in 2001 hired teacher for was 70 % in both English and French also in 2002 it fell below 60% during the next year French language teacher got in better position the graph has an upward trend on the other side English language to a downward as result during these years French become more popular than English

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 graph gives us a snapshot of rates hired teacher from first
 year after their graduation, according to the results the diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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 us in 2001 hired teacher for was 70 % in both English and French also
 in 2002 it fell below 60% during the next
 year French language teacher This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
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 in better position the graph has an upward trend on the other side English language to a downward as result during these years French become more popular than English

IELTS academic the graph gives us a snapshot of rates hired teacher from first year after their graduation, according to the results the

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