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the graph gives us a snapshot of rates hired teacher from first year after their graduation, according to the results the diagram shows us in 2001 hired teacher for was 70 % in both English and French also in 2002 it fell below 60% during the next year French language teacher got in better position the graph has an upward trend on the other side English language to a downward as result during these years French become more popular than English
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graph gives us a snapshot of rates hired teacher from
first
year after their graduation, according to the results the diagram
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us in 2001 hired teacher for was 70 % in both English and French
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in 2002 it fell below 60% during the
next
year French language teacher
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in better position the graph has an upward trend on the other side English language to a downward as result during these years French become more popular than English
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