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traditonal voting is better than computerized voting. agree or disagree

traditonal voting is better than computerized voting. agree or disagree VwEK6
In traditional voting, one major source of inaccuracy is that people accidentally vote for the wrong candidate. Voters usually have to find the name of their candidate on a large sheet of paper containing many names—the ballot—and make a small mark next to that name. People with poor eyesight can easily mark the wrong name. The computerized voting machines have an easy-to-use touchscreen technology: to cast a vote, a voter needs only to touch the candidate’s name on the screen to record a vote for that candidate; voters can even have the computer magnify the name for easier viewing.
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. The computerized

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touchscreen technology: to cast a vote, a voter

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the screen to record a vote for that candidate;

voters can even have the computer magnify

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for easier viewing.

IELTS academic traditonal voting is better than computerized voting. agree or disagree

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