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This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011.

This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011. BwYm6

This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011. At the first, UK population has been gradually reduced 14 million to 5 million for last 4 decades and by 1991 Britain and Asia had the same citizen count of 8 million as well as in 1994 other countries and England had the equal count. Expect the Asia and the united kingdom people other continents society not experienced a gradually change. In 1986 had the lower population and it has a peak in 2006 to 14 million, then begin to fall until 2011. Asian community grew systematically from 1976 to 2006 by 6 million, but after 5 years the count was increased rapidly by 3 million. In 1976, there were 23 million regions in Australia, but by 1996, the number had dropped to 18 million. The chart from 1996 to 2001 shows a significant increase for the next 5 years, after which the growth has been stable till 2011.

This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011.

At the first
, UK population has been gradually
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reduced
 14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 to 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 for last 4 decades and by 1991 Britain and Asia had the same citizen count of 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
as well
 as in 1994 other countries and England had the equal count.

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Expect
 the Asia and the The proper noun "United Kingdom" needs to be capitalized.United Kingdom
united kingdom
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 society not experienced a gradually
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. In 1986 had the lower population and it has a peak in 2006 to 14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 to fall until 2011.

Asian community grew systematically
 from 1976 to 2006 by 6 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
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but
 after 5 years the count was increased
rapidly
 by 3 million.

In 1976, there were 23 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 regions in Australia, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 by 1996, the number had dropped to 18 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. The chart from 1996 to 2001 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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 a significant increase for the next
 5 years, after which the growth has been stable till 2011. 