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This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011.

This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011. BwYm6
This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011. At the first, UK population has been gradually reduced 14 million to 5 million for last 4 decades and by 1991 Britain and Asia had the same citizen count of 8 million as well as in 1994 other countries and England had the equal count. Expect the Asia and the united kingdom people other continents society not experienced a gradually change. In 1986 had the lower population and it has a peak in 2006 to 14 million, then begin to fall until 2011. Asian community grew systematically from 1976 to 2006 by 6 million, but after 5 years the count was increased rapidly by 3 million. In 1976, there were 23 million regions in Australia, but by 1996, the number had dropped to 18 million. The chart from 1996 to 2001 shows a significant increase for the next 5 years, after which the growth has been stable till 2011.
This line chart depicts the living of the resident population in Australia from 1976 to 2011.

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, UK population has been
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14
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to 5
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million
for last 4 decades and by 1991 Britain and Asia had the same citizen count of 8
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as well
as in 1994 other countries and England had the equal count.

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the Asia and the
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society not experienced a
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. In 1986 had the lower population and it has a peak in 2006 to 14
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, then
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to fall until 2011.

Asian community grew
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from 1976 to 2006 by 6
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,
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after 5 years the count
was increased
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by 3 million.

In 1976, there were 23
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regions in Australia,
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by 1996, the number had dropped to 18
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. The chart from 1996 to 2001
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a significant increase for the
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5 years, after which the growth has been stable till 2011.

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