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The table compared to international tourist arrival in the top eight countries in 2009 and 2010 and the change in percentage

The table compared to international tourist arrival in the top eight countries in 2009 and 2010 and the change in percentage XqEBN

These data sources clearly communicate that the comparison of the foreign tourists to eight areas during the period between 2009 and 2010 As can be seen in the chart, there was a accelerate in America, Spain, England, and Italy. in a similar fashion, In Turkey, China and Germany saw an upper trend over the period shown. On the contrary, France was still remained unchanged and Hong Kong wasn't the most attractive foreign travellers to visit. France leads in terms of a plethora of international travel to visit which was 76 million, followed by America and Italia were accounted for 65 and 44 million travellers respectively. Less than America 10 million tourists come to visit was Spain and UK in this term. Followed by a year, the figure for US, Spain, UK and Italy experience a slight growth in the number of visitors, only about 1%. Looking from the overall perspective, It is clear that Germany, China, and Turkey have seen a large increase in tourist arrivals over time. Despite the fact that practically all of the other nations saw a minor improvement in the pattern, Hong Kong dropped to the bottom of the list.

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 a minor improvement in the pattern, Hong Kong dropped to the bottom of the list. 