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The below show the information about the spending of Chinese people on 5 different things from 1995 to2011

The below show the information about the spending of Chinese people on 5 different things from 1995 to2011 73Way

After analysing it can be seen clearly that 9% money was spent by the people of China on household goods in 1995 wireless by 3% on same item in 2011 in contrast expenditure of the Chinese individuals on food was hear about 1 in 7 in former year however spending of masses of China was declined by 9% on food in later yearthat 50 further that Chinese people spent almost identical amount of money on clothing in both pie charts where as this was a difference of 7% in the expenditure of masses of China on medicine in 1995 and 2011overall maximum money was spent by Chinese people on food vilest minimum proportion of the expenditure was seen on medicine in given time period

After Possible spelling mistake. 'analysing' is British English.analyzing
analysing
 it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
clearly
 that 9% money was spent
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of China on household This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in 1995 wireless by 3% on same item in 2011 in contrast
 expenditure of the Chinese individuals on food was Consider using a past participle here: "heard".heard
hear
 about 1 in 7 in former year however
 spending of masses of China was declined
 by 9% on food in later Possible spelling mistake found.year that
yearthat
 50 further
 that Chinese This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spent almost identical amount of money on clothing in both pie charts Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 this was a difference of 7% in the expenditure of masses of China on medicine in 1995 and 2011overall maximum money was spent
 by Chinese This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 on food A determiner is probably missing here: "the vilest".the vilest
vilest
 minimum proportion of the expenditure was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 on medicine in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time period