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The graph gives information about average price of a barrel of oil and the food price index from 2000 to 2011.It is clear that a dramatic increase in both commodity price was seen over period shown. Furthermore, the trend for both commodities were similar

The graph gives information about average price of a barrel of oil and the food price index from 2000 to 2011. It is clear that a dramatic increase in both commodity price was seen over period shown. Furthermore, the trend for both commodities were similar DlqmA
The graph gives information about average price of a barrel of oil and the food price index from 2000 to 2011. It is clear that a dramatic increase in both commodity price was seen over period shown. Furthermore, the trend for both commodities were similar, so a strong correlation is suggested. In 2000, the index of food price was about 90 points. The same pattern can be seen for oil price, just below $30 per barrel. Over following four years, both prices remained relatively stable, before rising dramatically between 2004 and 2007. By 2007, he average of oil price had more than double, to nearly $60 per barrel, food price rose by around 50 points. In 2008, average global prices of both oil and food rose suddenly, with oil price reaching a peak of approximately $130, world food index reaching to 220 points. By 2009, the figure for both commodities fall significantly, at $40 for average oil prices and 140 points for food price index, before rising one again in 2011. By 2011, oil cost reached at $100 per barrel, while index of food price peaked at 240 points.
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from 2000 to 2011.

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that a dramatic increase in both commodity
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rose by around 50 points.

In 2008,
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reaching a peak of approximately $130, world
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reaching to 220
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. By 2009, the figure for both commodities fall
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peaked at 240
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IELTS academic The graph gives information about average price of a barrel of oil and the food price index from 2000 to 2011. It is clear that a dramatic increase in both commodity price was seen over period shown. Furthermore, the trend for both commodities were similar

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