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The mentioned table portrays the amount of explorer to Ashdown Museum during the year before as well as the year after it was renovated.

The mentioned table portrays the amount of explorer to Ashdown Museum during the year before as well as the year after it was renovated. pRe2D
The mentioned table portrays the amount of explorer to Ashdown Museum during the year before as well as the year after it was renovated. The chart exhibits the outcome of estimation after interrogating the visitors about their contentment on the scale of their comfort with their visit during both periods. From the table it is seen that after reconstruction of the museum, number of sightseer have increased from 74000 to 92000. The pie chart gives a clear idea about the rate of progress obtained from the traveler's point of view. The average amount of extreme satisfaction rate before was 30 and now it have increased to 40. About 35 percent people were very satisfied after the development of the museum which was earlier 15. However, there are still people who were dissatisfied. 40 percent people were dissatisfied before which decreased to 15 percent now. Although the rate of percentage of very dissatisfied is noticed after refurbishment but it have eventually decreased to 5 percent from 10 percent. 5 percent visitors did not responded during and after the year of reincarnation. To epitomize, the reconstruction of the museum escalated the sum of explorers in the Ashdown Museum significantly. Especially, on the criteria of satisfaction after the reconstruction the rate of very satisfied and satisfied increased tremendously by 20 and 10 percent respectively. Furthermore, the decrement of rate of very dissatisfied and dissatisfied are by 5 and 25 percent respectively which is praiseworthy.
The mentioned table portrays the amount of explorer to
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during the year
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. The chart exhibits the outcome of estimation after interrogating the visitors about their contentment on the scale of their comfort with their visit during both periods.

From the table it is
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that after reconstruction of the
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, number of sightseer have increased from 74000 to 92000. The pie chart gives a
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clear
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about the
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of progress obtained from the traveler's point of view. The average amount of extreme satisfaction
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before
was 30 and
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now
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increased to 40. About 35
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people
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very
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museum
which was earlier 15.

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people
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visitors did not
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during and after the year of reincarnation.

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escalated the sum of explorers in the
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significantly
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of
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satisfied and satisfied increased
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respectively
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, the decrement of
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of
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dissatisfied and dissatisfied are by 5 and 25
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respectively
which is praiseworthy.
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IELTS academic The mentioned table portrays the amount of explorer to Ashdown Museum during the year before as well as the year after it was renovated.

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