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IELTS Essay Task 1: Carbonated Drinks

IELTS Essay Task 1: Carbonated Drinks 0ABAn

The diagram process depicts information about how fizzy drinks are manufactured. Looking from overall perspective, it is apparent that, the process(which is man-made) involves main 5 stages in these consequences, first filtering water for cleaning next evoporation and addition of carbon dioxide and then mixing the various types of ingredients and after that phrase filtering and filling and finally the packaging drinks it off to be sold. At the begging, water passed through to filter and it is purred by water softener and chemicals. Afterward, clean water is pumped into heated which generated by electric and eventually dispatched through a cooling pipe

The diagram process depicts information about how fizzy drinks are manufactured
.

Looking from overall
 perspective, it is apparent that, the process(which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made) involves main 5 stages in these consequences, first
 filtering You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for cleaning next
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evoporation
 and addition of carbon dioxide and then mixing the various types of ingredients and after that phrase filtering and filling and finally
 the packaging drinks it off to be sold
.

At the begging, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 passed through to filter and it is purred
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 softener and chemicals. Afterward, clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 into heated which generated by electric and eventually
 dispatched through a cooling pipe