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The graph compares the amounts of goods delivered by four means of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

The graph compares the amounts of goods delivered by four means of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002. xOPKa
The graph compares the amounts of goods delivered by four means of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002. Overall, it can be seen that transporting products by road accounts for the largest amount, while it is opposite for pipeline. In addition, the qualities of goods shipped by those modes increased over the years. In 1974, approximately 70 million tonnes of goods were transported by road, this followed by water and road, which had an equal output, at about 40 million tonnes. On the other hand, pipeline took responsibility for moving only 5 million tonnes. In the next 28 years, the importance of using the road as a channel/method to deliver reached a peak at nearly 100 million tonnes in 2002, meanwhile, the figure for pipeline rose sharply to around 41 million tonnes. In terms of rail, the figure for this mode recovered although it dropped significantly to 22 million tonnes in the first 10 years. Finally, there was a remarkable increase in the amounts of goods shipped by water to over 20 million tonnes in 2002
The graph compares the amounts of
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goods
delivered by four means of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that transporting products by
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road
accounts for the largest amount, while it is opposite for pipeline.
In addition
, the qualities of
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goods
shipped by those modes increased over the years.

In 1974, approximately 70
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million
tonnes of
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goods
were transported
by
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road
, this followed by water and
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road
, which had an equal output, at about 40
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million
tonnes.
On the other hand
, pipeline took responsibility for moving
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only
5
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million
tonnes.

In the
next
28 years, the importance of using the
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road
as a channel/method to deliver reached a peak at
nearly
100
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million
tonnes in 2002, meanwhile, the figure for pipeline rose
sharply
to around 41
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million
tonnes. In terms of rail, the figure for this mode recovered although it dropped
significantly
to 22
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million
tonnes in the
first
10 years.
Finally
, there was a remarkable increase in the amounts of
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goods
shipped by water to over 20
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million
tonnes in 2002
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IELTS academic The graph compares the amounts of goods delivered by four means of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

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4 paragraphs
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6.5
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