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The graph compares data about amount of tourists visiting a Caribbean island between 2007 an 2010.

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The graph compares data about amount of tourists visiting a Caribbean island between 2007 an 2010. Overall, it can be seen that, visiting rate increased over the last seven years. Furthermore, staying on island is more preferable option than staying on cruise ships. According to the graph, in the beginning of the period average one million people visited to the island, however, by 2017 this rate significantly increased to 3. 5 millions in total. Staying on cruise ships became popular from 2012 and rose gradually by the end of time frame from 0. 3 million to 1. 8 million visitors, though there were some insignificant decreases till 2012. Mostly visitors stayed on island and the rate was over 0. 5 million and it remained steady in 2011. Subsequent years the rate increased to 1. 5 millions in 2013. Nevertheless there were some slightly low rates by the end of year it remained stable (1. 5).
The graph compares data about amount of tourists visiting a Caribbean
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island
between 2007 an 2010.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that, visiting
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rate
increased over the last seven years.
Furthermore
, staying on
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island
is more preferable option than staying on cruise ships.

According to the graph, in the beginning of the period average one
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million
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people
visited to the
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island
,
however
, by 2017 this
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rate
significantly
increased to 3. 5
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millions
in total.

Staying on cruise ships became popular from 2012 and rose
gradually
by the
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end
of time frame from 0. 3
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million
to 1. 8
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million
visitors, though there were
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some
insignificant decreases till 2012.
Mostly
visitors stayed on
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island
and the
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rate
was over 0. 5
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million
and it remained steady in 2011. Subsequent years the
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rate
increased to 1. 5
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millions
in 2013.
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Nevertheless
there were
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slightly
low
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rates
by the
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of year it remained stable (1. 5).
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