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Process diagram of noodle manufacturing

Process diagram of noodle manufacturing N2wb

The process diagram illustrates the steps that must be taken to produce instant noodles. Overall, there are 8 steps in the process of manufacture where it starts with storing flour and ended with sealing the product. At the start of the manufacturing process, flour is loaded from a truck and stored in storage silos. Furthermore, the flour is extracted and put into a mixer where water and oil is added in the process. This mixture then will be processed by rollers so that it creates sheets of dough. In the next step, it is separated to create individual dough strips. After that the dough is formed to become noodles discs. The manufacturing process will now cook the noodle with oil and then immediately put it through a drying process afterwards. The cooked noodles is then packaged into individual cups with vegetables and spices also added inside it. Finally, all of the cups will be labelled and then sealed by the machine.

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