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The chart illustrates the volume of fruits and vegetables consumed by the individuals of UK in the year 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The chart illustrates the volume of fruits and vegetables consumed by the individuals of UK in the year 2002, 2006 and 2010. b82q
The chart illustrates the volume of fruits and vegetables consumed by the individuals of UK in the year 2002, 2006 and 2010. Overall, Females leads in taking fruits and vegetables for all the years and children remained at the lowest position in consumption of these items. Looking at the Bar chart, the percentage was fluctuating for all three genders. In 2002, 22% of males ate fruits and vegetables and it slightly increased by 2% in 2010. However, there was a very low increment by 1% in women's diet over the years 2002(25%) and 2010(26%). Despite that, the slight increase had shown in children's consumption of food items (11% in 2002 to 16% in 2010). The consumption of fruits and vegetables was at the peak during 2006 in the females (intake 32%). In contrast, 26% of the male population and 18% of youngsters consumed the items.
The chart illustrates the volume of
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consumed by the individuals of UK in the year 2002, 2006 and 2010.

Overall
, Females leads in taking
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fruits
and
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vegetables
for all the years and children remained at the lowest position in consumption of these items.

Looking at the Bar chart, the percentage was fluctuating for all three genders. In 2002, 22% of males ate
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fruits
and
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vegetables
and it
slightly
increased by 2% in 2010.
However
, there was a
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low increment by 1% in women's diet over the years 2002(25%) and 2010(26%). Despite that, the slight increase had shown in children's consumption of food items (11% in 2002 to 16% in 2010).

The consumption of
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fruits
and
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vegetables
was at the peak during 2006 in the females (intake 32%).
In contrast
, 26% of the male population and 18% of youngsters consumed the items.

IELTS academic The chart illustrates the volume of fruits and vegetables consumed by the individuals of UK in the year 2002, 2006 and 2010.

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