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The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. b83Y
The charts below illustrates the daily intake percentage of various nutrients an average person in the USA consumes in his daily routine. These are taken in Lunch, Snacks and Dinner, over consumption of these are unhealthy. The given chart includes three main nutrients required by our body on daily basis those are, Sodium, Saturated fat and Added sugar. A lot of people intake Sodium and Healthy fat in their dinner due to their health benefits, whereas food containing are eaten during evenings, at snack time. Sodium and Saturated fat intake is higher during dinner 43% and 37% respectively, meanwhile 29% and 26% like them during lunch, meanwhile 42% of them like added sugar foods during snacks, 23% of people eat this nutrient for dinner. To start a day healthy is very important, very few like these nutrients in their breakfast, only 14%-16% of them have such added nutrients in the mornings.
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due to their health benefits, whereas food containing
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IELTS academic The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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