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The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. mP8q
The picture illustrates the results of comparisons between total number of visitors to Museum before and after refurbishment and results of surveys of visitor satisfaction level. The first category of amount of traveller to Ashdown Museum by using table, while the second category used pie chart to identify the differences. At for the table section, the visitors are significantly increase for approximately fifty-percent of it's original value of before improvement. As of this statistic, the performance index of this investment is considered as highly success. For the next category of surveys' satisfaction answer of visitors, the most significant highlight in the result of very satisfied between before and after is gradually increase from fifteen percent to roughly thirty-five percent as shown by dotted section. However, in the second best satisfaction level is not impressively increase since it cleary shown that it increase since it cleary shown that it increase by approximately ten percent. Nevertheless, it should be improve on how to encourage the respondent to response the surveys more because the number still shown on identical of five percent. In conclusion, the high amount of money that the management put into improve the facilities is considering as highly succesful due to the indicies highlighted by the word table and the chart.
The picture illustrates the results of comparisons between total number of
visitors
to Museum
before
and after refurbishment and results of surveys of
visitor
satisfaction level. The
first
category of amount of
traveller
to
Ashdown
Museum by using table, while the second category
used
pie chart to identify the differences.

At for the table section, the
visitors
are
significantly
increase
for approximately fifty-percent of
it's original value
of
before
improvement. As of this statistic, the performance index of this investment
is considered
as
highly
success.

For the
next
category of surveys' satisfaction answer of
visitors
, the most significant highlight in the result of
very
satisfied between
before
and after is
gradually
increase
from fifteen percent to roughly thirty-five percent as shown by dotted section.
However
, in the second best satisfaction level is not
impressively
increase
since it
cleary
shown that it
increase
since it
cleary
shown that it
increase
by approximately ten percent.
Nevertheless
, it should be
improve
on how to encourage the respondent to response the surveys more
because
the number
still
shown on identical of five percent.

In conclusion
, the high amount of money that the management put into
improve
the facilities is considering as
highly
succesful
due to the
indicies
highlighted by the word table and the chart.
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IELTS academic The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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