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propotion of power delivered from six distinct kinds in Gareline in 1997, 2007, and 2017

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The pie chart gives information about the proportion of power delivered from six distinct kinds in Gareline in 1997, 2007, and 2017. In general, it is clear that hydro and geothermal sources occupied the plurality throughout the period given, while nuclear witnessed a significant rise, thus becoming one of the three main origans at the end of the duration. Looking at the chart in the year 1997, hydro was the most popular type of energy at 45%; meanwhile, geothermal was slightly less than half of this value and ranked second at 22%. In the following 10 years, hydro rose sharply and maintained the first position at 76% before clashing at 34% at the end of the duration. Besides, geothermal decreased by 14% and then rocketed to 39%, becoming the most popular energy source in the year 2017. The remaining categories all showed an upward trend in their propotions. Specifically, nuclear experienced a soar, from 0% in 1997 to 15, 5% in 2017 in the 20 subsequent years. The remaining kinds of energy were unchanged or went up within a range of 1, 3% to 2%. At the end of the duration, these number accound for 7% (wind), 2, 5% (gas) and 1, 4% others.
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Gareline
in 1997, 2007, and 2017.

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clear
that hydro and geothermal sources occupied the plurality throughout the period
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, while nuclear witnessed a significant rise,
thus
becoming one of the three main
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origans
at the
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of the duration.

Looking at the chart in the
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year
1997, hydro was the most popular type of energy at 45%; meanwhile, geothermal was
slightly
less than half of this value and ranked second at 22%. In the following 10 years, hydro rose
sharply
and maintained the
first
position at 76%
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before
clashing at 34% at the
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end
of the duration.
Besides
, geothermal decreased by 14% and then rocketed to 39%, becoming the most popular energy source in the
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year
2017.

The remaining categories all
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showed
an upward trend in their
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propotions
.
Specifically
, nuclear experienced a soar, from 0% in 1997 to 15, 5% in 2017 in the 20 subsequent years. The remaining kinds of energy
were unchanged
or went up within a range of 1, 3% to 2%. At the
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end
of the duration, these number
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accound
for 7% (wind), 2, 5% (gas) and 1, 4% others.
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IELTS academic propotion of power delivered from six distinct kinds in Gareline in 1997, 2007, and 2017

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