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The number of foreign visitors in 6 years from 2000

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The given column chart depicts information about the number of foreign visitor at three different resorts in Vietnam over the period of six years, commencing from 2000. The Da Nang resort had the highest visitors in 2000, while Mui Ne had the lowest. However,  six years later, Da Nang has become the resort with the fewest visitors, while Mui Ne has had the most. It can be seen that the number of visitors to Mui Ne is increasing while that of Da Nang is decreasing. The number of visitors to Phu Quoc has change, but slightly. Mui Ne had the fewest travelers in 2000, with 200, 000 fewer than Phu Quoc resort and 600, 000 fewer than Da Nang resort. Until 2002, Da Nang had the most tourists, and the number of guests at Phu Quoc as 180, 000 more than at Mui Ne. Two years later, the visitors at Mui Ne increased significantly, making it the resort with the most customers at 750, 000 people, while Da Nang has the fewest, with fewer than 50, 000 people compared to Phu Quoc. Mui Ne still leads in visitor numbers, 700, 000 more than Da Nang and 320, 000 more than Phu Quoc in 2006. Between 2000 and 2002, the number of visitors to Phu Quoc increased by 100, 000. However, between 2002 and 2004, the number fell from 600, 000 to 550, 000. Over the next two years, the number of visitors increased from 550, 000 to 630, 000. In Da Nang, the number of visitors decreased, falling from 900, 000 to 650, 000 in the first two years. The number of visitors fell by 150, 000 in the next two years compared to 2002. The number of visitors in 2006 was only 250, 000 people. Finally, in six years, the number of visitors to Mui Ne increased from 300, 000 to 950 thousand. An increase of 130, 000 people in the first two years, 320, 000 people in the next two years, and 200, 000 people in the last two years.
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in Vietnam over the period of six years, commencing from 2000. The
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Da
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Nang
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had the highest visitors in 2000, while
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six years later,
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Nang
has become the
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with the fewest
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is decreasing. The
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and 600, 000 fewer than
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Nang
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. Until 2002,
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Nang
had the most tourists, and the
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of guests at
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Quoc
as 180, 000 more than at
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Mui
Ne. Two years later, the
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with the most customers at 750, 000
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has the fewest, with fewer than 50, 000
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.
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, 700, 000 more than
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and 320, 000 more than
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Quoc
in 2006.

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fell from 600, 000 to 550, 000. Over the
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from 550, 000 to 630, 000. In
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Nang
, the
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decreased, falling from 900, 000 to 650, 000 in the
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fell by 150, 000 in the
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250, 000
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Finally
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from 300, 000 to 950 thousand. An increase of 130, 000
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