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the graph below the amount in imported food in US, in four nations in the year 2005, 2010, 2015

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The graph illustrates the information about amount of imported foods in US dollars in four countries in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Overall, United States had the highest imported food in three year among all coutires 70000 dollars, 950000 dollars and 135000 dollars respectively. Inadia had the lowest level at 10000 dollars, 15000 dollars and 20000 dollars. In 2005, United States imported goods was the highest 70000 dollars, second higest was United Kingdom 45000 dollars followed by China 21000 dollars respectively. India had the lower at 5000 dollars. In 2010 again United States had accounted the highest imports with 95000 dollars, followed by United Kingdom with 70000 dollars and third highest was China at 21000 dollars. Same India had low imports with worth of 15000 dollars. In 2015, again United States had the highest import and reach to worth of 135000 dollars. I can be seen there was change in that China became the second higest nation above 100000 dollars followed by Untied Kingdom above 60000 dollars. Again had the lowest import with worth 20000 dollars.
The graph illustrates the information about amount of imported foods in US
dollars
in four countries in 2005, 2010 and 2015.

Overall
,
United
States
had the highest imported food in three year among all
coutires
70000
dollars
, 950000
dollars
and 135000
dollars
respectively
.
Inadia
had the lowest level at 10000
dollars
, 15000
dollars
and 20000 dollars.

In 2005,
United
States
imported
goods
was the highest 70000
dollars
, second
higest
was
United
Kingdom 45000
dollars
followed by China 21000
dollars
respectively
. India had the lower at 5000
dollars
. In 2010 again
United
States
had accounted the highest
imports
with 95000
dollars
, followed by
United
Kingdom with 70000
dollars
and third highest was China at 21000
dollars
. Same India had low
imports
with worth of 15000 dollars.

In 2015, again
United
States
had the highest
import
and reach to worth of 135000
dollars
. I can be
seen
there was
change
in that China became the second
higest
nation above 100000
dollars
followed by Untied Kingdom above 60000
dollars
. Again had the lowest
import
with worth 20000
dollars
.
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