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Process of making cherry jam

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The diagram demonstrates a complete process of cherry jam production lines. There are 9 main stages that the process is started by gathering cherries in the garden and finished by labeling jam containers in the factory. First, cherries are collected by spreading a sheet on the ground and shaking the tree. Next, the crops are transported by trucks to the factory. After that, cherries are sent into an automatic machine in order to separate the leaves, stems and extra things from fruit and classificate the cherries as well. Next, washing process is done by spraying numerous water jets on the cherries while they are being moved on a ramp. After a while, the crops are directed by a conveyor in order to remove seeds. In this line plenty metal spikes are placed for pitting. Next stage is cooking cherries in a giant pot. Other ingredients are added during the process, as well. After checking the quality of jam by the experts in the laboratory, the jars are filled by jam in an automated process. Finally, all products are labeled.
The diagram demonstrates a complete
process
of cherry jam production lines. There are 9 main stages that the
process
is
started
by gathering
cherries
in the garden and finished by labeling jam containers in the factory.

First
,
cherries
are collected
by spreading a sheet on the ground and shaking the tree.
Next
, the crops
are transported
by trucks to the factory. After that,
cherries
are
sent
into an automatic machine in order to separate the
leaves
, stems and extra things from fruit and
classificate
the
cherries
as well
.
Next
, washing
process
is done
by spraying numerous water jets on the
cherries
while they are being
moved
on a ramp. After a while, the crops
are directed
by a conveyor in order to remove seeds. In this line
plenty
metal spikes
are placed
for pitting.
Next
stage is cooking
cherries
in a giant pot. Other ingredients are
added
during the
process
,
as well
. After checking the quality of jam by the experts in the laboratory, the jars
are filled
by jam in an automated
process
.
Finally
, all products
are labeled
.
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IELTS academic Process of making cherry jam

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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