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The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. VBlQ7
The graph reports various attributes of exports such as fuel, food and manufactured goods for one country. Also, the line chart explains total value for selected and fuel exports between 2000 and 2005. Firstly, we observe that there is a sudden spike in fuel export value between 2003 and 2005, recording a highest value of 425000 million dollars. However, it has seen the heights only after reaching its lowest value of 250000 million dollars in the year 2002. Coming to selected exports visualization, we have food attribute which has been consistently below the 10000 million dollars value over the period of time from 2000 to 2005. In spite of reaching a highest value in the fuel exports graph the fuel value in this graph has been reduced to double the value, which is close to 20000 million dollars by end of 2005. Lastly, manufactured goods value has seen an increase just above 20000 million dollars by 2005. To sum up, the manufacturing good value has been at consistent position when compared to the other selected exports.
The graph reports various attributes of
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exports
such as
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fuel
, food and manufactured
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goods
for one country.
Also
, the line chart
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explains
total
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value
for selected and
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fuel
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exports
between 2000 and 2005.

Firstly
, we observe that there is a sudden spike in
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fuel
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export
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value
between 2003 and 2005, recording
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a
highest
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value
of 425000
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million
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dollars
.
However
, it has
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seen
the heights
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only
after reaching its lowest
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value
of 250000
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million
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dollars
in the year 2002.

Coming to selected
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exports
visualization, we have food attribute which has been
consistently
below the 10000
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million
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dollars
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value
over the period of time from 2000 to 2005.
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In spite of
reaching
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a
highest
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value
in the
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fuel
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exports
graph the
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fuel
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value
in this graph has been
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reduced
to double the
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value
, which is close to 20000
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million
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dollars
by
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end
of 2005.
Lastly
, manufactured
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goods
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value
has
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seen
an increase
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just
above 20000
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million
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dollars
by 2005.

To sum up, the manufacturing
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good
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value
has been at consistent position when compared to the other selected
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exports
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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