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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. 15anq
The bar chart demonstrates actual numbers and future projections of the Japanese population from 1950 to 2055. Additionally, the table below illustrates the number of Japanese people older than 65 and their proportion in the same period. Overall, the population of Japan gradually increased between 1950 and 2010. Starting from 2015, the population started to decline and it is expected to keep falling until 2055. In addition, the proportion of people older than 65 in the total population kept increasing trend since 1950 and projected to rise until 2035. In detail, the population of Japan was 84, 1 million in 1950 and experienced a remarkable increase until 1995 to 125, 5 million. Between 1995 and 2015, the number fluctuated around 126 million. The increasing trend was changed in 2005 at the peak 127, 8 million and the population started to decline. In 2035 and 2055, the population is projected to be 110 million and 89, 9 million respectively. Moreover, the number of people in Japan aged more than 65 was 4, 1 million in 1950. The number rocketed to 25, 7 in 2005. In the same period, the proportion of them in the total population became 20 % from 4. 9%. In the future, the concerned population is projected to be 37, 2 million in 2035 and 36, 5 million in 2055, and their proportion to be 34% and 41% respectively.
The bar chart demonstrates actual
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numbers
and future projections of the Japanese
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population
from 1950 to 2055.
Additionally
, the table below illustrates the
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number
of Japanese
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people
older than 65 and their
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proportion
in the same period.

Overall
, the
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population
of Japan
gradually
increased between 1950 and 2010. Starting from 2015, the
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population
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started
to decline and it is
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expected
to
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keep
falling until 2055.
In addition
, the
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proportion
of
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people
older than 65 in the total
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population
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kept
increasing trend since 1950 and projected to rise until 2035.

In detail, the
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population
of Japan was 84, 1
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million
in 1950 and experienced a remarkable increase until 1995 to 125, 5
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million
. Between 1995 and 2015, the
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number
fluctuated around 126
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million
. The increasing trend was
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changed
in 2005 at the peak 127, 8
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million
and the
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population
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started
to decline. In 2035 and 2055, the
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population
is projected
to be 110
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million
and 89, 9
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million
respectively
.

Moreover
, the
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number
of
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people
in Japan aged more than 65 was 4, 1
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million
in 1950. The
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number
rocketed to 25, 7 in 2005. In the same period, the
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proportion
of them in the total
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population
became 20 % from 4. 9%. In the future, the concerned
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population
is projected
to be 37, 2
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million
in 2035 and 36, 5
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million
in 2055, and their
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proportion
to be 34% and 41%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

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