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Changes of colwick arts center between 2005 and today

Changes of colwick arts center between 2005 and today Jol0k

The two maps show changes of the Colwick Arts Center between 2005 and today. As can be seen, the major changes were developed during these years. In the past, the concert hall and cinema were in a same place almost in middle of the Colwick Arts Center which they were relocated in separated spaces in the top and top right-hand respectively. The empty place in the center was filled with the central exhibition area as a new case in the Art Center. The meeting room was moved to a new place a little upper than the previous location. In addition, it was divided to two smaller meeting rooms. Two galleries in right-hand, are relocated on the other side of the site. A small drama studio was constructed middle of the the cinema and the meeting room 1. As a substitution case, the snack bar was replaced with a cafe between the gallery and the green space. In order to use the wasteland in the bottom, an outdoor exhibition and performance area were created which are surrounded with a lot of trees. Besides, recreation facilities were developed around the garden. Nevertheless, it is obvious the Colwick Arts Center has widely changed and expanded and some necessary items were added.

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