Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

making dairy process such as milk, butter and...

making dairy process such as milk, butter and. . . BJlap

This represented diagram explains processing dairy products. Overall, various stages are organized which start with nurturing cows in the grassland and finish with food distribution in the market. To begin, after grazing, herd cows are sent into the specific places for milking process. Unexpected movements of cows are controlled in these restricted and narrow chambers. The process is accomplished with milking machine based on sanitary protocols. Following this, milk is gathered into the refrigeration storage directly. The milk is transported with milk tanker trucks to the factory. Given the importance of providing fresh milk in dairy industry, this part of the process has to be done daily. Then milk tanker is discharged in order to fill the giant cylindrical storages which are placed in dairy unit. The storages are connected with each other with several pipes which have the duty of moving milk to other units of the factory. Next, in each unit a specific product is produced and packaged. finally, All products such as pasteurized milk, butter, cream and cheese in various are distributed in the super-markets and shops for daily consumption with various kinds of packing and containers.

This represented diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 processing dairy products. Overall
, various stages are organized
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with nurturing cows in the grassland and finish with food distribution in the market.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
, after grazing, herd cows are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 into the specific places for milking process. Unexpected movements of cows are controlled
 in these restricted and narrow chambers. The process is accomplished
 with milking machine based on sanitary protocols. Following this, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is gathered
 into the refrigeration storage directly
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is transported
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 tanker trucks to the factory. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 the importance of providing fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 in dairy industry, this part of the process This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be done
 daily. Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 tanker is discharged
 in order to fill the giant cylindrical Possible spelling mistake found.storage
storages
 which are placed
 in dairy unit. The Possible spelling mistake found.storage
storages
are connected
 with each other with several pipes which have the duty of moving You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 to other units of the factory. Next
, in each unit a specific product is produced
 and packaged. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFinally
finally
, All products such as pasteurized You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, butter, cream and cheese in various are distributed
 in the super-markets and shops for daily consumption with various kinds of packing and containers. 