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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Wym1K
The bar chart shows cities on it's X-axis and percentage of city residents on Y-axis. This chart suggests the consumption of coffee or tea by the citizens of five cities in last 4 weeks. The chart is suggesting that cafeteria is the place which is most relevant for selling coffee or tea but in Adelaide city instant coffee is more popular. There small number of people who are fan of fresh coffee. In most of the cities coffee bought from cafeteria and fresh farmed coffee's ratio is 1: 2. Half of the residents buys coffee or tea which is readymade but in some of the big cities like Melbourne, Sydney, Hobart more than 60% of the population tend to buy coffee from some cafeteria. These big cities also has more number of fresh coffee buyers than other cities. This bar chart suggest that coffee has become an essential part of everyone's life.
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in last 4 weeks. The
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in Adelaide city instant
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is more popular. There
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who are fan of fresh
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from cafeteria and fresh farmed coffee's ratio is 1: 2. Half of the residents
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buyers than other
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suggest that
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has become an essential part of everyone's life.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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