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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. BJaop
The picture below illustrates how much American customers payed on average for mobile and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010. Overall, both 2 types of phone services moved forward significantly noticeable during the decade. Cell phone services started bottom to the highest point on the picture at the end. In contrast, residential phone services stated high costs at first. However, the cost decreased as a straight line and it never went up the cost until the end. In 2001, people spent 200 dollars for cell phone services on average. Since then, the cost increase drastically and when it was in 2006, general numbers of people pay for it as same amount as residential phone services. The numbers didn’t stop increasing yet and it achieved almost 700 dollars in 2010. Meanwhile, residential phone services costed almost 700 dollars on average too when the time was in 2001. As I mentioned before, the numbers went down without any fluctuations. Since 2006s, residential phone services seemed less popular phone services than mobil phones. The majority of people still decreased the cost for residential phone services and it eventually arrived around 400 dollars in 2010.
The picture below illustrates how much American customers
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payed
on average for mobile and
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residential
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phone
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services
from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, both 2 types of
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phone
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services
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moved
forward
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noticeable during the decade. Cell
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phone
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services
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started
bottom to the highest point on the picture at the
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end
.
In contrast
,
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residential
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phone
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services
stated high
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costs
at
first
.
However
, the
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cost
decreased as a straight line and it never went up the
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cost
until the
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end
.

In 2001,
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people
spent 200
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dollars
for cell
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phone
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services
on average. Since then, the
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cost
increase
drastically
and when it was in 2006, general numbers of
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people
pay for it as same amount as
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residential
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phone
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services
. The numbers didn’t
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stop
increasing
yet
and it achieved almost 700
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dollars
in 2010.

Meanwhile,
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costed almost 700
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on average too when the time was in 2001. As I mentioned
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before
, the numbers went down without any fluctuations. Since 2006s,
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residential
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phone
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services
seemed less popular
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phone
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services
than
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mobil
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phones
. The majority of
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people
still
decreased the
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cost
for
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residential
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phone
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services
and it
eventually
arrived around 400
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dollars
in 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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