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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. kYew2
The given bar chart gives information about the amount of profits in a particular country by exports in 5 categories (petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products, and textiles) in 2015 and 2016. The table shows the portion change in each category during the same period of time. Units are measured in dollars. Overall, it is clearly seen that the amount of export earnings are higher in 2016 as compared to 2015, in the most of categories (except gem and jewellery). The country made the highest export profits by petroleum products in both year, slightly higher than 60 billion dollars in 2015 and approximately 62 billion dollars in 2016. In addition, there is almost no difference between the amount of the export profits by agricultural products in 2015 and that of in 2016. In terms of textiles, the export earnings considerably increased by 15. 24 percent from 2015 to 2016, while the amount of the profits by gems and jewellery decreased by around 5 percent during the same period of time.
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profits
in a particular country by
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exports
in 5 categories (petroleum
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products
, engineered
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goods
, gems and
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jewellery
, agricultural
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products
, and textiles) in 2015 and 2016. The table
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shows
the portion
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change
in each category during the same period of time. Units
are measured
in dollars.

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, it is
clearly
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seen
that the
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amount
of
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export
earnings are higher in 2016 as compared to 2015, in the
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most of categories
(except gem and
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jewellery
).

The country made the highest
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export
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profits
by petroleum
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products
in both year,
slightly
higher than 60 billion dollars in 2015 and approximately 62 billion dollars in 2016.
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, there is almost no difference between the
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amount
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export
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profits
by agricultural
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products
in 2015 and that of in 2016.

In terms of textiles, the
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export
earnings
considerably
increased by 15. 24 percent from 2015 to 2016, while the
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profits
by gems and
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jewellery
decreased by around 5 percent during the same period of time.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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