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The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

First given graph represents the value of fuel exports from 2000 to 2005. It shows that the value of fuel decreased by 5 lakhs in 2002 and started increasing afterwards. Similarly, the next graph is showing a comparison between the value of multiple exports like, fuel, food, and manufactured goods. In this, the value of fuel is showing a fall from 2000 to 2005 and manufacturing goods are showing both increase and decrease in order in its value, but the value of food has remained the same throughout 5 years. Hence, it clarifies that the value of fuel is having a great loss while both food and manufactured goods have the same value as year 2000 and 2005
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graph represents the
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of
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fuel
exports from 2000 to 2005. It
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shows
that the
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value
of
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fuel
decreased by 5 lakhs in 2002 and
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started
increasing afterwards.
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graph is showing a comparison between the
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value
of multiple exports like,
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fuel
, food, and manufactured
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goods
. In this, the
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value
of
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fuel
is showing a fall from 2000 to 2005 and manufacturing
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goods
are showing both increase and decrease in order in its
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value
,
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but
the
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value
of food has remained the same throughout 5 years.

Hence
, it clarifies that the
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value
of
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fuel
is having a great loss while both food and manufactured
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goods
have the same
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value
as year 2000 and 2005

IELTS academic The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

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