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Table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s.

The given chart shows, reason behind less fertility of land due to land degradation. In North America, deforestation causes only 0. 2% of land degradation, while in Europe it affects 9. 8% of total land degradation. Similarly, over-grazing affects oceania by 11. 3%, while in North America only 1. 5% of land got affected by over- grazing. Moreover, Europe has maximum affect of over-cultivation, while oceania has no loss with it. Overall, North America has got minimal affect by 5%, while Europe is dealing with maximum loss with 23%.
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degradation. In North America, deforestation causes
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degradation, while in Europe it
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by 11. 3%, while in North America
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by over- grazing.
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by 5%, while Europe is dealing with maximum loss with 23%.
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IELTS academic Table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s.

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