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The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

n these Days, the world based on two criteria which are Import and export. As we see In the first graph the value of fuel in minimized in the first two years, while in 2005 the value is 400000 millions which is an indicator of the huge demand on the fueling, and in those years, the foods are stable withing those years, while the demand on the fuel in 2000 is around 15000 million dollar and minimized year by year due to the demand on the green machines and the manufactured goods are withing a range of 20 to 30000 million. At the end the export in the countries depend on the people if they are consuming or manufacturing.
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these Days, the world based on two criteria which are Import and export.

As we
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graph the value of fuel in minimized in the
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two years, while in 2005 the value is 400000 millions which is an indicator of the huge demand on the fueling, and in those years, the foods are stable withing those years, while the demand on the fuel in 2000 is around 15000 million dollar and minimized
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due to the demand on the green machines and the manufactured
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are withing a range of 20 to 30000 million.

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the export in the countries depend on the
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if they are consuming or manufacturing.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

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