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The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in six different types of professionacross the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The given diagram reports the executive gender distribution through six different types of profession in UK in 2007, showing big differences in three of them. Overall From the outset, “Journalism” is the only profession where male and female are equally distributed in executives’ roles. Like the first, in “Advertising” and “Law”men and women professionals seem to be almost the same with forty-five and fifty-five percent distribution for the first and the opposite percentages for the second one. Similarly, but not the same is the “Scientists” profession that shows a sixty percent of male executives and forty percent of female executives, which is the first proof of gender discrepancy in the Job world. On the other end, it could be found a wide difference in “Therapists”, where more than eighty percent of executives are women while less than twenty percent are men. Moreover, the biggest differences represented are in “Teaching” and “Construction” where the distribution is not equally distributed. Ninety percent of executive teachers are female like ninety percent of executive constructers are male while the remaining ten percent of those two represent the small presence of the opposite gender in these professional roles.
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and women professionals seem to be almost the same with forty-five and fifty-five
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distribution for the
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and forty
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, which is the
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proof of gender discrepancy in the Job world. On the other
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, it could
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executives
are women while less than twenty
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teachers are female like ninety
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presence of the opposite gender in these professional roles.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in six different types of professionacross the UK in 2007.

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