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The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories.

The line graph illustrates the growth of the economy, and the pie charts show the division of household spending from 1995 to 2010. Overall, it is clear that the economy fluctuated over the period, and the most amount spent on housing, food, and other categories while the least amount on clothing, entertainment, and travel. From 1995 to 2005, the growth in the economy increased slightly by around 1 percent. Roughly one-third amount was spent on housing, food, and others; however, less than 10 percent was contributed by clothing, entertainment, and travel. From 2000 to 2005, the economy rose to about 5 percent; however, the expense on housing rose slightly, and that part contributed by food. Moreover, clothing, entertainment, and travel experienced a slight rise, and there is no such difference witnessed in other categories. From 2005 to 2010, the economy dipped down and rose steeply; it reached again at 0 percent approximately as same as 1995. While expenditure on food and housing relatively similar to each other, clothing, entertainment, and travel seemed like 1995, and expenses on other categories were more or less similar.
The line graph illustrates the growth of the
economy
, and the pie charts
show
the division of household spending from 1995 to 2010.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the
economy
fluctuated over the period, and the most amount spent on housing,
food
, and
other
categories while the least amount on clothing, entertainment, and travel.

From 1995 to 2005, the growth in the
economy
increased
slightly
by around 1
percent
. Roughly one-third amount
was spent
on housing,
food
,
and others
;
however
, less than 10
percent
was contributed
by clothing, entertainment, and travel.

From 2000 to 2005, the
economy
rose to about 5
percent
;
however
, the expense on housing rose
slightly
, and that part contributed by
food
.
Moreover
, clothing, entertainment, and travel experienced a slight rise, and there is no such difference witnessed in
other
categories.

From 2005 to 2010, the
economy
dipped down and rose
steeply
; it reached again at 0
percent
approximately as same as 1995. While expenditure on
food
and housing
relatively
similar to each
other
, clothing, entertainment, and travel seemed like 1995, and expenses on
other
categories were more or less similar.
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IELTS academic The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories.

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