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The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

The graph shows the value of fuel, food, manufactured goods and the total value of exports in one country from 2000 to 2005. As we can see the total value of exports grows up during last four years. In year 2000; 2001 and 2002 the total export was droping down, but after that situation gets better and the total export in year 2005 is nearly 450, 000 million dollars. We can see that the export of food is almost the same for all years, every year below 10, 000 millions dollars. The export of fuel in year 2000 was about 45. 000 million dollars but it was getting down and in year 2005 was only half this amount, what is mean 20. 000 millions dollars. Manufactured food in the year 2000 was a little below 20. 000 millions dollars and in the year 2005 a little above 20. 000 million dollars.
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the value of fuel, food, manufactured
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value of
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exports
in one country from 2000 to 2005.

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grows up during last four years. In
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2000; 2001 and 2002 the
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export
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after that situation
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in
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2005 is
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that the
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of food is almost the same for all years, every
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below 10, 000
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millions
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. The
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of fuel in
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2000 was about 45. 000
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it was getting down and in
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2005 was
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half this amount, what is mean 20. 000
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. Manufactured food in the
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year
2000 was a
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

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3 paragraphs
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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