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The graph below shows the total music sales by various methods in percentage. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total music sales by various methods in percentage. Kw8LL
The line graph gives the information about the comparison of total music sales(in percentage) through streams, downloads and CDs purchased over a given time period (from 2011 to 2018). Overall, it can be observed that the majority of people opt for the streams compared to downloads or CDs. An exponential uptrend can be seen in the years from 2011 to 2018. In the year 2011, the sales of CDs was at its peak which is near to 55% of the total sales whereas streaming accounted merely 5% of the overall sales. Streams was rising gradually in the following years, In the contrary, A slow downslide has started in CDs. The sales of both streaming and CDs accounted 29% in the year 2016. CDs reached its nadir which is 27 percent in the year 2018 and the least among all the three different methods. Streams continued to rise exponentially over a given period of time to finish at almost 40 percentage in the year 2018 which become a highest proportion of the music sold. Furthermore, a slight rise observed from 35% and reached it apex of 42% in the year 2014, dramatically dwindled to 30%.
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purchased
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time period (from 2011 to 2018).

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streams
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CDs
. An exponential uptrend can be
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seen
in the years from 2011 to 2018.

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2011, the
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sales
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CDs
was at its peak which is near to 55% of the total
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sales
whereas streaming accounted
merely
5% of the
overall
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sales
.
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was rising
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CDs
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sales
of both streaming and
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CDs
accounted 29% in the
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year
2016.
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CDs
reached its nadir which is 27 percent in the
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2018 and the least among all the three
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different
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continued to rise
exponentially
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2018 which become
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highest proportion of the music sold.

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2014,
dramatically
dwindled to 30%.
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