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The graph below shows the rate of women s literacy and population growth in selected countries from 1988 to 2000 v.2

The graph below shows the rate of women s literacy and population growth in selected countries from 1988 to 2000 v. 2
A glance at the graph provided reveals a negative correlation between the proportion of female literacy and population growth rate in various countries from 1988 to 2000. Specifically, the top five nations with the highest percentage of women' s literacy had by far lower levels of population growth. With 96% literate women, Thailand and Colombia shared their population growth rates of mere 1. 4% and 1. 8%, respectively. Likewise, with levels of female literacy ranging from 84% to 90%, Dominican Republic, Jamaica, and Sri Lanka had population growth rates of just under 2%. In stark contrast, the remainder five countries suffering from low rates of literacy for women showed markedly high figures for population growth. Especially, having a negligible 9% of women knowing how to read and write, Afghanistan' s population increases at the highest rate among listed countries, namely 4. 5%. Similarly, all the other countries had their population rates of well above 2. 9%, with staggering low women' s literacy levels, at between 8% and 21%.
A glance at the graph provided reveals a
negative
correlation between the proportion of female
literacy
and
population
growth
rate
in various
countries
from 1988 to 2000.

Specifically
, the top five nations with the highest percentage of
women&
#039; s
literacy
had by far lower levels of
population
growth
. With 96% literate
women
, Thailand and Colombia shared their
population
growth
rates
of mere 1. 4% and 1. 8%,
respectively
.
Likewise
, with levels of female
literacy
ranging from 84% to 90%, Dominican Republic, Jamaica, and Sri Lanka had
population
growth
rates
of
just
under 2%.

In stark contrast, the remainder five
countries
suffering from low
rates
of
literacy
for
women
showed
markedly
high figures for
population
growth
.
Especially
, having a negligible 9% of
women
knowing how to read and write,
Afghanistan&
#039; s
population
increases at the highest
rate
among listed
countries
,
namely
4. 5%.
Similarly
, all the other
countries
had their
population
rates
of well above 2. 9%, with staggering low
women&
#039; s
literacy
levels, at between 8% and 21%.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the rate of women s literacy and population growth in selected countries from 1988 to 2000 v. 2

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