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The graph below shows the rate of women s literacy and population growth in selected countries from 1988 to 2000 v.2

The graph below shows the rate of women s literacy and population growth in selected countries from 1988 to 2000 v. 2
A glance at the graph provided reveals a negative correlation between the proportion of female literacy and population growth rate in various countries from 1988 to 2000. Specifically, the top five nations with the highest percentage of women' s literacy had by far lower levels of population growth. With 96% literate women, Thailand and Colombia shared their population growth rates of mere 1. 4% and 1. 8%, respectively. Likewise, with levels of female literacy ranging from 84% to 90%, Dominican Republic, Jamaica, and Sri Lanka had population growth rates of just under 2%. In stark contrast, the remainder five countries suffering from low rates of literacy for women showed markedly high figures for population growth. Especially, having a negligible 9% of women knowing how to read and write, Afghanistan' s population increases at the highest rate among listed countries, namely 4. 5%. Similarly, all the other countries had their population rates of well above 2. 9%, with staggering low women' s literacy levels, at between 8% and 21%.
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from 1988 to 2000.

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had by far lower levels of
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. With 96% literate
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, Thailand and Colombia shared their
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of mere 1. 4% and 1. 8%,
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ranging from 84% to 90%, Dominican Republic, Jamaica, and Sri Lanka had
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the rate of women s literacy and population growth in selected countries from 1988 to 2000 v. 2

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