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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v.3

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v. 3
The line graph indicates the amounts of goods transported using four distinct types of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002. Overall, it is clearly shown that the amounts of goods transported in the UK by all four different types of transport increased over the given period. It is noticeable that there was a significant rise in the quantities of goods transported by road in the UK from 1974 to 2002. First and foremost, the most significant change of goods transported in this country on road generally increased from 1974 to 2002. It was about 70 million tonnes in 1974 rose to its highest point at just under100 million tonnes in 2002. This similar increasing trend can be seen on goods transported by water and pipeline, they started just below 40 and about 5 million tonnes respectively and rose to just above 60 and above 20 million tonnes in the last year. Among the three types of transport, goods that were transported on road were the most popular modes of transport. An opposite trend can be observed for the goods transported using rail. In 1974, it was exactly 40 million tonnes and declined to about 30 million tonnes in 1984. It then showed a fluctuation pattern from 1984 to 1995. It rose considerably until the year 2002 and reached its peak at just over 40 million tonnes.
The line graph indicates the amounts of
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goods
transported using four distinct types of transport in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
, it is
clearly
shown that the amounts of
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goods
transported in the UK by all four
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different
types of transport increased over the
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given
period. It is noticeable that there was a significant rise in the quantities of
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goods
transported by road in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

First
and foremost, the most significant
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change
of
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goods
transported in this country on road
generally
increased from 1974 to 2002. It was about 70
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million
tonnes in 1974 rose to its highest point at
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just
under100
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million
tonnes in 2002. This similar increasing trend can be
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seen
on
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goods
transported by water and pipeline, they
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started
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just
below 40 and about 5
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million
tonnes
respectively
and rose to
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just
above 60 and above 20
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million
tonnes in the last year. Among the three types of transport,
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goods
that
were transported
on road were the most popular modes of transport.

An opposite trend can
be observed
for the
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goods
transported using rail. In 1974, it was exactly 40
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million
tonnes and declined to about 30
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million
tonnes in 1984. It then
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showed
a fluctuation pattern from 1984 to 1995. It rose
considerably
until the year 2002 and reached its peak at
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just
over 40
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million
tonnes.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v. 3

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3 paragraphs
228 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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